Liz

By charliebrown

She lays with him,
His wife she is,
"Please me woman,
I'll call you Liz".

It matters not
He's not with her,
All he wants 
Is flesh and fur.

Does not he know
Of the cool nite air,
The tender touch,
The gentle stair.

To feel her breath 
on my skin!
I lay alone
and her with him.   

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Copyright 2010 charliebrown
Published on Sunday, March 21, 2010.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I can really feel the agony in this poem. Very good.

  • Dreamzz On Sunday, March 21, 2010, Dreamzz (19)By person wrote:

    Hmmm a few flaws, but this is very good.

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