can't even say

By Forsaken Me

i can't even say
   it's nothing you want to hear
so i'll sit in silence
  silent tears upon the face of scars
close my hands upon razors
 an edge i can feel
you leave me dead inside
 still i speak your name softly
in search of that glow
 but the sun's gone blind
this darkess to bright
it hurts.

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Copyright 2010 Forsaken Me/brian daniels/rudolph
Published on Friday, February 5, 2010.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Dude, I love the imagery you have used. Very good work. And seriously, Depressed :P

  • maggot death On Friday, February 5, 2010, maggot death (60)By person wrote:

    Wow.....I like the opposites in this poem, and it makes me realize how alone you are in the write.....pretty good write. The people of DP will appreciate you:)

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