I Should Have Said...

By Elf

I curse myself,
I made a mistake,
loosing what was most important,
If i had spoken up,
would he be here now?
I could have said something,
I could have at least said, "goodbye."

On that warm afternoon,
with the sun in my eyes,
I ran,
waving, crying,
but i was too late,
to even say "goodbye."

I always prided myself on having courage,
but when my voice catches in my throat,
how can i speak?
when will i see him again?
sooner is always better than later,
but you can never be sure,
so, the least you can say,
is "goodbye."

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Copyright 2003 Elf
Published on Thursday, May 22, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: WONDERFUL! *applauds* I know that feeling so well! Simply amazing, write more! I love my friends.

  • Elf On Friday, May 23, 2003, Elf (47)By person wrote:

    thank you!

  • DoctorAsh On Friday, May 23, 2003, DoctorAsh (371)By person wrote:

    arrgh .. i hate that, when that little speaker inside shuts off ... it happens more often then most of us would like to admit .. awsome write .. the icecream's worst enemy is heat . D&A

  • Demosthenes On Thursday, May 22, 2003, Demosthenes (155)By person wrote:

    youre wonderful! i love it! -B

  • Elf On Friday, May 23, 2003, Elf (47)By person wrote:

    thank you sara, and everyone else to; i really appreciate the commentary.

  • A former member wrote: Awesome piece!Keep it up!

  • A former member wrote: Hey it is a really good poem, my ex b/f who I love left to go in the Marines and I hade selfish pride and didn't even say good-bye. So this poem really shows how stupid I was but it is a good poem!

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