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By darkcoldplace

flowery language and 'hidden themes'
mask the fact their useless things
a fools treasure in an abandoned mine
theres no meaning between these lines

your thoughts invoke my rage
2 dimensional thoughts, on a 3-d page
lost in trasit or just random words?
it doesnt matter, they just look good

lets space the lines and form them right
make it seem like a pretty sight
make sure they look new and fun
put a mask on just because

sugar coat this peice of shit
shine it up, and add some spit
tie a bow and hope the best
pray they dont think this shallow
just open your mouth, and swallow

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Copyright 2009 Ivan Darkhardt
Published on Wednesday, October 21, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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