Wishing you were here

By zarrock70

sitting in this pit of sorrow
sitting all alone
wishing i could see the light
wishing that this barren wasteland of my life
wasn't so completely devoid of life
why is this my destiny
why is this my path
I want someone to make me happy
something that might actually last

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Copyright 2009 zarrock70
Published on Friday, October 16, 2009.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Deaths Apostle On Wednesday, December 30, 2009, Deaths Apostle (65)By person wrote:

    I am definitely getting into your stuff man

  • A former member wrote: You have some great pieces. Short and deep. Well done. =)

  • jajang829 On Friday, October 16, 2009, jajang829 (23)By person wrote:

    Lovely jilted-lover's lament. The pain is real. great write!

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