At the Edge of Winter

By Mathesix

We held hands... at the edge of winter
Gave no thought to fates entwined
Standing on the precipice, precarious and nestled
Within us, the idea to fall

I gave in... to the marked temptation
Virulence, I am Me
With disregard to conforming platitudes
Becoming abject with each decree

She was fair... a goddess rebirthed
Within a flame, the phoenix call
To the touch, remained an ember
Conflagration cause

"As it kindled dreams anew
She sent distress, left eschewed
In happenstance, a romance
A projectile performance...

A new spark was formed."

She was fair... a monarch standing
Beneath the fall, above the crown
In shadows bathed, the virgin canopy
Sheathed in crimson sea

I gave in... to the casket dowry
Verdant lined and airless seamed
Wearing ashes, shaped as roses
Faces painted false

We held hands... at the edge of winter
Given no hope, no dangled string
Standing on the precipice, we begin counting
One.
Two.
Three...

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© 2009 Joshua Cagle
Published on Saturday, February 14, 2009.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • ColourGod On Saturday, March 7, 2009, ColourGod (43)By person wrote:

    If someone should make this into a graphic novel its pages would drip with renaissance. Thank you for writing this.

  • A former member wrote: dying angel said it perfectly when she said "OH MY" , beautifully tragic and inspiring write , dont stop ...

  • whisperer On Saturday, February 14, 2009, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    the image born by this piece to me was of someone standing at a cliff teary eyed with a dying autum forest at their back counting slowly as the wind cut their face with snowflakes..a rock solid work

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