Falling Inward (Toward a Bitcrushed Gridlock)

By Eric

A shifting mind
Ever so blind
Fallen into
Falling up
~
When time is nearing
Its ending moment
Will you hear
That weary call?
Will you find
And save us all?
A sullen fall.

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© 2008 Eric Scott Diaz
Published on Monday, June 30, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: delicious!!!! i have nothing but compliments!!!!!!!!!!!!! u are a phenominal poet

  • Eric On Monday, June 30, 2008, Eric (77)By person wrote:

    yes i do. thanks

  • verablue On Monday, June 30, 2008, verablue (106)By person wrote:

    please tell me you actually listen to bitcrush and gridlock? other than that, i love the simple and tormented beauty of this.

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