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Climax
By ReddropX
I writhe in pain and pleasure
exhaling in deep release.
My hand grasps your shoulder
and slides down as if I’m falling into oblivion
finding your breast as fingertips resonate through the senses. The pressure
intensifies to a new high
then suddenly takes your breath away.
Cries of ecstacy announce the release
while fingernails mark the occasion.
All that’s left is quivering flesh
gasping for breath.
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© 2008 ReddropX
Published on Thursday, April 3, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Climax"
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On Tuesday, August 22, 2017, Just Dave
(457)
wrote:
Lawd mercy I need a cigarette. Great sexy write. JD
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A former member wrote:
*lights a cig* wowsers. *blows a dragon out of the smoke* nice dude. ^_^
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A former member wrote:
explosive *lights the grenade* >:)
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On Friday, April 4, 2008, Moonflower
(301) wrote:
god damn. this is nice :)
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A former member wrote:
cigarette anyone....nice
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On Friday, April 4, 2008, denver nitze
(256) wrote:
i'll take one. *sighs* very nice. *blows smoke rings* ~ta~
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On Thursday, April 3, 2008, Niemand
(361) wrote:
*squeezes thighs* Very pleasing ;)
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On Thursday, April 3, 2008, Rebel tiGer King
(258) wrote:
indeed, looks like saturn :D pleasing to the eye, but i did like the piece, intense and moving, nicely done -symph-
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On Thursday, April 3, 2008, thelostmessenger
(112) wrote:
short yet intense. this is great. *messenger
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A former member wrote:
Very nice climax, and I do like this write.
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On Thursday, April 3, 2008, elisa
(1616) wrote:
intense and to the point.. i like it. ..and i think it looks like saturn:)
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