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Beautiful Imprisonment
By LordCaballero
Loneliness has made me it's prisoner,
Enveloping me in a cloak of darkness
It overpowers me, muffling my cries for help,
No one hears, or even cares for,
the murder of my soul that is taking place.
Tears fall as I think of you.
You're the reason loneliness invaded my life.
Yet you become my deliverer.
Tomorrow you'll realize
Sometimes to love things you have to lose them.
Maybe someday.
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© 2008 LordCaballero
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A former member wrote:
this is really true.......... i love the deep emotion that is caused here
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On Monday, March 31, 2008, Alanarchy
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This captures the pain in loss very effectivly. I hope you've got it out of your system, because the act of something like that only means you've let the world beat you, and that's no way to be remembered. Write on. One typo near the beggining. YOu should have no problem spotting it.
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