Never Ending Space

By Celeste0224

As I wait
im in check mate
i feel stalled
failing to start anything
because your coming
waiting to start the next chapter of my life
already closed the last
sitting on an empty page
feeling suffocated by ink
waiting... waiting... waiting...
the space before me looms gloomily...
waiting to hold your hand...
the coming chapter is "us"...
will you hurry up already
i cant breath
in this holding pattern

still waiting

hurry
im drowning....

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© 2008 Celeste0224
Published on Sunday, March 23, 2008.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: great write..:D

  • Dancing_Monkey On Sunday, March 23, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    good write, a loose ending, but I did enjoy it, especialy the part; will you hurry up already i cant breath in this holding pattern

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