Your Eyes

By Just a Rose

Looking into your eyes
I see everything that I want
Nothings wrong and nothings right

The whole world stops
We couldn’t care less what happens
It only matters that this moment lasts forever

I touch your lips and kiss your eyes
I know that only you can save me from myself

The questionÂ…
Can I save you from yourself?
We are both on the same path to self-destruction

Yes when I look into your eyes I can see your love
But there is fear as well
You are still looking for more?

I want to be able to bring the light to your life
The one that you brought to mine

I know that only a few words can ruin this moment
They will take you away

The thought that ruins this moment

We were meant for each other
But fate can only go so far
I want to fill all your voids but you have to let me
Don’t let this haunt me anymore


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Copyright 2005 Just a Rose
Published on Sunday, June 26, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Well I find this poem better than some of the work from when I first started writing. But yet I still have been to lazy to put some of my own work on here even though I have won my share of contests. I still think that you are a skilled writer..

  • Thorn On Wednesday, June 29, 2005, Thorn (294)By person wrote:

    Beautiful. I love this write.

  • A former member wrote: don't worry...youre a really good writer- summer

  • Black_Cherry_Doll_ On Tuesday, June 28, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (70)By person wrote:

    the last stanza was brilliant!!

  • A former member wrote: I love this write it says so much! Great write!!

  • A former member wrote: this write truly is amazing

  • A former member wrote: I'm glad you polished this up. You're better than you know.. I know you're amazing. Keep it up, doll. Welcome to DP.

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