Comments by jaunty pill
- "
A good solid ending. You have a way with directional short writes. They seems to say so much in an immense and small space. It cooks up some thoughts that are perplexing and rare. Tempered and moody. Lovely. "
Posted by jaunty pill on "Dark Psalm" by elisa
- "
The first part is so original. The rhymes that are on top of each other and the way they work...Accute and startle. And I don't much like rhyme. It is short and proud. Defind and radiant. Lovely and well-written."
Posted by jaunty pill on "The Whole" by elisa
