Comments by disc
- "The big word that stands out here is "wow." I enjoyed your beautiful alliteration and the image you burned in my mind. I also love how you wrote of "yin and yang," good idea to intertwine this into your work. Wonderful!"
Posted by disc on "And he smiled" by Alacer_Cogitatus
- "very sorrowful as these others have said. the last line made for a brutally painful ending. wonderful write."
Posted by disc on "Heartbreak" by Alacer_Cogitatus
