Comments by Queazenart
- "I really enjoy the format and premise of this piece. "Meaningless stare : Meaningless thoughts/Why is it all the good I forgot?" is my favorite stanza out of the bunch, but really they're all great parts to a great whole. Btw fourth from the bottom stanza says "seems" when it should be "seams" and I know it's probably annoying to have someone comment on a little spelling error like that but I can't help it DX Otherwise spectacular poem! "
Posted by Queazenart on "Meaningless World : Blank Life" by LiesWithin
