Comments by Noel Haiasi

"I agree, that line really stuck out to me. Great job friend, keep it up!"
Posted by Noel Haiasi on "burn me" by beamish

"This is a well written piece. My favorite line was, "She has been brainwashed into believing her wealth is her body and not her mind." Only thing I see are a few grammatical errors. Clean it up and you've got an awesome poem."
Posted by Noel Haiasi on "Neon sex" by beamish