Comments by A_Puppet_Show
- "I dislike them befor reading them, and the more you's the worse for me. Still it seemed real enough. "
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on ""you"" by darkangelXlll
- "I do not find it boring, neither do I stand intrigued like I did with an ealier writing of yours. But you should choose not to listen to me when I comment on "you poems""
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on ""you"" by darkangelXlll
- "In a way the exact opposite of the poem we both commented on. Leaving me to be a selective hypocrite. But arent we all? -Tiger-"
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "my love" by darkangelXlll
- "But that is realy how you read it; my eyes have trouple with the 3-4 line shift. The content of the poem is just fine, I loved following your track."
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "my love" by darkangelXlll
- "The form used here, fail in the hands of many people. In my eyes you do not here. There could be a little playing with the ending of the lines while keeping them long still(the little break when read out loud)"
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "my love" by darkangelXlll
