Comments by Railway_Butterfly
- "I keep re-reading it to try and mention bits that I really loved, but again - I begin, and it slips through my hands like a wish fish.. it's undeniably beautiful, anyway. And there are plenty more reasons for me enjoying this, that I don't think i'm really equipped to articulate. I hope it doesn't sound wanky, but 'thanks for sharing' anyway. I very much enjoyed the half hour it took for me to read, contemplate and comment on this.
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Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "Pearl projector eyes" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "I feel like every word connected to and complimented every other one so perfectly.. but the way you often structure and punctuate your pieces always leaves me in two minds. With this, I feel like it becomes this tumbling wave of words and images that kind of overrun eachother as I read them, because they all fit together so well.. but then it's all over so quickly and I feel like I don't quite know what i've read.. so I go back, read it again, the same thing happens.. it's quite surreal, kind of frustrating because I want to grasp hold of it, but in a sense it's so clever simply because I can't.. the harder you try to grab for it, the more it slips and the more you just want to be able to seize it.. on the other hand, as a writer I get how restrictive punctuation can feel when you're trying to create something, so I can reason with myself as to where you might be coming from. Though, thinking that really makes me want to hear you read it aloud."
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "Pearl projector eyes" by King_Crazy_Dave
