Comments by hazydaisy
- "this has potential. are you a newer poet? i like the attention to detail, the attic window, the curtains, the clothes that don't crease. it creates a very vivid picture. what i think is lacking just a little bit is some of the emotion. how does being a ghost feel? what's it like not being seen, or not to see? make it bleed, you know? overall this is good. i'm be looking out for more."
Posted by hazydaisy on "Ghosts in this house" by little-known
