Ghosts in this house
By little-known
I am a ghost in this house
A shadow of the past, shapeless
moving around you silently
Carefully stepping on the stair steps that don't creak
Sliding along the oak floors
Wearing invisible clothes that don't crease
wondering constantly for your warmth to come back
grace me with your presence once more
To be as we were
solid unbent, perfection
You are a ghost in this house
The breeze through the attic window that shimmers the curtains
The cold side of the bed
Wondering constantly for us to meet again
We walk circles round each other
Our hands never touch
Our bodies never meet
I look for you in everything
room to room but no luck
I am a ghost in this house
You bound up the stairs but never make a sound
I turn as I think I see a shadow
Sitting on our bed with your head in your hands
A crying broken man
We are ghosts in this house
One alive one dead
Moving around each other
Forever looking
Comments on "Ghosts in this house"
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A former member wrote:
Perfect oblivion....beautiful stanzas and unforgettable...loved it,
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On Friday, December 13, 2013, hazydaisy
(132) wrote:
this has potential. are you a newer poet? i like the attention to detail, the attic window, the curtains, the clothes that don't crease. it creates a very vivid picture. what i think is lacking just a little bit is some of the emotion. how does being a ghost feel? what's it like not being seen, or not to see? make it bleed, you know? overall this is good. i'm be looking out for more.