Comments by Jonas
- "poignant... piercing... touches the very essence of the want of divinity... lost in the presence and putresence of a world impossible, grace will never descend"
Posted by Jonas on "Fall From Grace" by celestine_moon
- "wowness... there were some points when the rhythm of the piece was deviated from (this is an abstract concept in my mind... it's not critique) but that only added to the intensity and arcane flavour of this piece"
Posted by Jonas on "Slice" by celestine_moon
- "i love poems like this... the artist only comes out at night... it's an arcane thing, something special to be... nice, amusing thoughts"
Posted by Jonas on "Observations At 3 AM" by celestine_moon
- "fast paced and fearful, i can feel hot tears and drops of blood on my face as i struggle, fruitlessly....."
Posted by Jonas on "Back To That" by celestine_moon
