Comments by tmanzano
- "It starts as mere melancholy memories, and then slams the heart into a deep misery of questions that even attacks the lost. I had to stop and let the riveting imagery of "angels pour their tears over us tonight" sink in to the causing effect of inclusion to the lost... Well done here.... Am I the only one who see this?? "
Posted by tmanzano on "My Undying Love" by AnaMia92
- "The ending line stamped it for me... Brill... Peace. Yes, I really enjoyed that ending line. "
Posted by tmanzano on "Peace" by AnaMia92
- "Well done, the imagery you spin here is riveting. I especially like the blood that is traveling between the glass. It lends strength to the visual. Very visceral for me... I wrote a piece similar to this called "Crazy Hot". Very similar in ideas. Good read. Welcome to DP..."
Posted by tmanzano on "Screaming for YOU My Tragic , Yet Beautiful Masterpiece" by AnaMia92
- "The title is well thought out. This piece is direct and with no pulled punch. The emptiness owned and written here is palpable. It is thickly expressed and leaves the reader wanting to shake the subject awake. Depression can be a force in writing. Sometimes the only outlet one has. Keep writing. Read as many other works as you can. Envelope yourself in it. Structure your pieces and take this time to find yourself. Because here is what will happen... One day things will get better, and the muse will leave you. You will left to stare into the abyss, wishing it to come back. Conjuring is the most difficult. Good luck."
Posted by tmanzano on "Drunk on Loneliness " by AnaMia92
