Comments by tmanzano
- "I rather enjoyed this. "So let me fade like music notes", this is wonderful here. The use of music to describe the subject fading into the background is a great use of imagery but more so than that, of word choice. It makes it visceral. This is well done and enjoyed the simplicity of the message but not to be diminished by the delivery. Well done."
Posted by tmanzano on "Sorrowful Songs of Things that have Gone Wrong" by Noel Haiasi
