"This definately can stand on it's on. I agree with Shipwreck statement as well. I also enjoy the (a,b,a) rhyming pattern" Posted by BoldSolitude on "~~~~Articles of War~~~~" by Ophelia
"I thougt of a saying that probably bests says what I was feeling. "Poetry is the revelation of a feeling that the poet believes to be interior and personal which the reader recognizes as his own". Salvatore Quasimodo
" Posted by BoldSolitude on "The Sovereignty ( my final battle chapter)" by Ophelia
"Man, this poem actually moved me and that is rare. You have described an universal experience so vividly and so accurately that I can't even acurately give it enough praise." Posted by BoldSolitude on "The Sovereignty ( my final battle chapter)" by Ophelia