"awwwwwwww this is lovely...if I am reading this (correctly) as a message, it is wonderfully heartfelt. " Posted by flying_fox on "The bay's lonely fish" by LoneWolf
"great observation... as they say, Those who can, do. Those who can't, criticise. FF" Posted by flying_fox on "Starving Artist" by LoneWolf
"I agree with wish - the repetition works well. The rhythm needs a little adjusting fo smooth the flow. I really like the the linkage of thought. FF" Posted by flying_fox on "Just in Case" by LoneWolf
