Comments by blue angel
- "Fascinating enigma. Your complexity mingles well in poetry. The bread of wisdom, isn't sweet. Thank you for sharing with me. - blue angel"
Posted by blue angel on "Propheceit " by Ortolan
- "Thank you for the response. Very interesting. There is a lot to absorb, naturally, bearing the subject. There are those who walk above the surface and those who tread upon it. Touching the surface means feeling it. Once the textured weight of that versatility is felt, - memory's sensation is set in motion. We'll never forget. As for building on unstable, tainted or sacred land, it is never wise, as we've learned. It disrupts the sanctity of nature. Thusly, writing their own demise, perhaps a slow destruction of misfortune. Mythically speaking it makes for fantastical fiction. However, there is truth hidden behind all fiction, and it feeds upon the flesh. Beyond a mere survey, the reveal comes from seasons spent. Only then can respect be obtained. - Pondering still, blue angel"
Posted by blue angel on "Propheceit " by Ortolan
- "What I'm getting at: Is there more to your poem, than 'Death/punishment to America'? If not then I'm puzzled by that conception. Also, I just want to say that 'politics and religion' do NOT represent 'America' (her symbolism). Freedom and Peace to ALL, is what she represents, and highly respecting the Sacred Holy Lands. Power-tripped corruption is a byproduct of greed, on all accounts. If no one else is brave enough to ponder this, surely I am. Fear does not flow through my veins, in the flesh or cyber-waved. Open minded communication is key to understanding, especially through the mind of a poet. - blue angel"
Posted by blue angel on "Propheceit " by Ortolan
- "It's just that I have stepped above seedy organized corruption to gaze upon Earth; our planetary Mother, as a divine gift. Being careful not to be hindered in spirit, and thought by Man's agenda. Your clairvoyant ambiguity comes forth heated in tone, because I believe you're close to the fire (metaphorically speaking). A thought provoker, but I would like a clearer, perhaps less poetic, understanding of your message's meaning. I enjoy cryptic poetry, however, repetitive devices can have a sharp edge. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Respectively, blue angel "
Posted by blue angel on "Propheceit " by Ortolan
- "We'll continue to toss our pennies into the wishing well, by fate Nature consumes all things back into her bosom along with Man's symbolic heart. "
Posted by blue angel on "Propheceit " by Ortolan
- "All eyes gaze upon her beauty, alas, drunken by her indivisible nature, insecure by bold hands that reach within the unlimited bounds of their mind's poverty. Tugging still at her skirt of trodden grace with hands grimed in self engrossed thirst. Defacing her with a parched heart borne by lands once fashioned by such Godly eyes . And so she weeps. America forbearer of comfort to all who seek shelter from tyrant oppressors, travail on. - Thought provoker, - blue angel"
Posted by blue angel on "Propheceit " by Ortolan
