"this is so lonely, like standing on a street corner in the dark when it's 10 degrees outside, and no one ever comes to get you. " Posted by girlafraid on "Shower [ice cold]" by Possesion
"the last line was excellent, it really brought everything together in a seamless way. nice work..." Posted by girlafraid on "Incinerate|Glory" by Possesion
"i like how this is broken up...it still maintains a good flow, but it makes the reader take in each stanza. very good piece, i'll have to read more..." Posted by girlafraid on "Hush, Your words are ice on skin.." by Possesion
