Comments by capt_funguy

  • "the " drowned girl" made the blue vivid with a little startle .. the others mentioned " flow " .. i agree completely ... but more than that , it has dimension ,"
    Posted by capt_funguy on "The Inevitable Return" by wannabe_rebel
  • "that was sweet ... extended compassion with some intricate detail " .... raindrops darken the concrete stairs ..." very smooth like choronzon said ... great work ... funguy"
    Posted by capt_funguy on "A Prayer" by wannabe_rebel
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