Comments by Alanarchy

  • "Awwww. I have a stuffed alf- remember alf?- that I'm keeping forever. Screw the grandkids, bitches, alf is mine. I don't know if this is the one you mentioned, but I enjoyed it nevertheless. As far as criticism goes.... I loved the underlying message here. Letting go. And the tone and phrasing were good. I can't really call you out on anything, you've thought of everything. So nice work, and write on."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "An Old Friend" by CorruptedLittleGirl
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