Comments by Alanarchy

  • "I'm very glad this was re-written... It breaths deeper now. I'm especially glad the all-caps were taken down from the title. I have a thing about all-caps. Anyway... I love the scene you set. Curtains are burning, audience, trampling each other in panic. Ceiling falling in. Show must go on. Show must go on. "
    Posted by Alanarchy on "American Beauty { re-written]" by Numbers Peppelini
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