Comments by Alanarchy
- "This captures the pain in loss very effectivly. I hope you've got it out of your system, because the act of something like that only means you've let the world beat you, and that's no way to be remembered. Write on. One typo near the beggining. YOu should have no problem spotting it."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Beautiful Imprisonment" by LordCaballero
- "Dangerous, potent infatuation. Like something that crawls and drags through the mind of a serial killer, as he tosses and turns at night, dreaming of his first victim. Or relishing the anticipation of his next. LOL, please don't think that I think you're a serial killer. Hahaha. That's just where my mind goes. Excellent work. Welcome to darkpoetry."
Posted by Alanarchy on "My true love" by LordCaballero
