Comments by Alanarchy
- "Most definately Poe-esque. I don't believe the olde english to be TOO stuffy. However, I'd think it would have been more original not to have bothered with it. I don't mean to take from your hard work, and I'm not saying this isn't a good piece, and this it isn't already clever, and original. But as I said, it is VERY like 'The Raven' by Poe. That may have been your intention. But, my thoughts are, I would have liked to see it more like you. Just my two cents. Write on."
Posted by Alanarchy on "The Haunting of Mr. Lombale" by Efamilia