Comments by Alanarchy
- "Just one piece of criticism and then I'll shut up. I could be wrong about this but I think you meant "Life" in the first line. Not "Like". Otherwise, this was perfect."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Funeral Flowers" by monalisamarie
- "My god... I'm never - NEVER - this excited about a rhyme/structered poem. But this... This was something special. Beautifuly crafted couplets that just flow. FLOW. and your content was breathtaking. Welcome to DP. With a vengance."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Funeral Flowers" by monalisamarie
