Comments by stormtalk
- "Oo, fun. I like how the end disintegrates into a barely-cohesive but still clearly meaningful string of words. Also, "sexual motion/impedes/emotional/devotion" is an interesting thought. You gave the one-word stanzas a damn good go - keep it up!"
Posted by stormtalk on "About Last Night (adult content)" by Jaded Jezzabelle
