"Crunch... crunch... crunch... listen to the termites chatter, there's always something to learn..." Posted by stormtalk on "playing with fire" by wannabe_rebel
"Your rhyme is smooth and strong... well done. The only wish worth wishing is to never wish to wish again..." Posted by stormtalk on "Unsatisfied" by wannabe_rebel
"Clever use of metaphor... darker secrets are rather similar to tapeworms... nicely done, even if not intended to be understood." Posted by stormtalk on "The Worm" by wannabe_rebel
"Singularly awesome. Clearly well thought-out and well-executed. I knew from the title it would be good ;)" Posted by stormtalk on "Feelings of Fat" by wannabe_rebel
