Comments by Seraphic
- "Half way through it seemed to change it's meaning, or I'm just not getting it. Nonetheless, it had a wonderful flow to it and the emotion isn't lacking in either half :) *~seraph~*"
Posted by Seraphic on "Take it." by Belle
- "That last line softens the whole piece, as I started to read, I felt disgust...but the conflict that last line causes changes it completely. nicely done *~seraph~*"
Posted by Seraphic on "Linens" by Belle
- "I say that abortion is the choice of the woman who carries the baby...but my goddaughter almost didn't make it. And that is something I just can't stomach. This broke my heart. Wonderfully written *~seraph~*"
Posted by Seraphic on "Emily Anne" by Belle
