Comments by darknessrises909
- "I love this poem! It ryhmes and it sounds good, the words just fit together and it expresses how most of us feel a lot of the time. It's a great piece and as BloodCountess said, you should be proud. :)"
Posted by darknessrises909 on "+Worthless+" by ExaCute
- "I just read your comment that this poem is about losing your daughters. I am very deeply sorry for your loss, I can't imagine the pain it caused you. Though it is terrible pain, this poem is beautiful in such a twisted way. Your words are beautiful. The way they sound and the way the words just fit together and the poem is fast paced, you can practically imagine yourself in the same situation, bleeding. I can relate to it, bleeding for someone else, hurting yourself to feel okay. I hope you are doing alright. This is an amazing piece."
Posted by darknessrises909 on "bleed for the angels" by denver nitze
- "I love this poem!
The lines "I'll lead you into the core of rage
all things beautiful, dark and clear
all things wrong and so fucking right" made me shiver! I absolutely love the way the poem sounds when read out loud and the over all meaning of the poem. I love your comparisons and how there is so much expression in this poem. That, and it sounds awesome! Fairy wings open like the legs of a whore. Love it. I love your work. :)
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Posted by darknessrises909 on "Paper Cut" by Sticky Kitty
- "This is a wonderful poem. It has a lot of detail and all of the words just sound so good together. It has a good flow and it is a great expression of the way that so many people feel. Like somewhere along the way, they just lot themselves and they don't know how to get back. It definitely reflects on me and who I am and it was a very touching poem for me. Thank you for writing it."
Posted by darknessrises909 on "Lost ....." by Zhee
