Comments by Nehema
- "This is very telling and a true story for far too many. You started with tight rhymes that fell loose in the middle and tightened back up towards the end. Not new to writing, even without consistent rhyming, this reads easy, horribly haunting theme, but well written. Welcome to the valley, Devilish told me to read you, I look forward to more of your work - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Baby Doll" by darkheartmagic
