Comments by Virgils Vigil

  • "This is a great write. A powerful rush. My only criticism is the final line. I don't know if it is a typo or intentional, but I would rather read it as either "ready to live" or "read for life". Either would be a fantastic final line and an impactful end to an impactful poem. Write on. "
    Posted by Virgils Vigil on "Dead Girl!" by M Morgan
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