Comments by Poetic-Realm
- "This took me deep into all that is the scarlet you... I felt the animal in your bite and the woman in your whisper. I tried to claspe onto beautiful images to save me from the summit and downfall. There is rough pain skimming through your veins and you don't handle it tenderly. You take heed in it's independent mind-giving soulfulness but you yearn for the others who would cut your hair and tie bells amongst your strands. Sending them into the bonfire during the rain dance of your body. Exquisite images following me here. If there was ever a poem of nautical fire and dried waterfalls spitting lessons to the one who begs for the lonesome intelligence and unreal visions of love this would be it. At least this is how I see it. Maybe I am just not diving deep enough...."
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "brazen" by Feral
