Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- "and also find the lines "Catches the blood we too often bleed,
So saline that in it worms won't breed" especially disturbing and effective at creating the mental picture for which you were going. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Who Has Won?" by Litteratus
- "This is an amazingly well-written piece! This is a hard style to pull off and you have done so wonderfully! I agree the ending is very effective, "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Who Has Won?" by Litteratus
- "Fantastic piece! Rhythmic and dreamlike, which fits the subject matter perfectly. Your ending is wonderful, "you'll learn yet,
as your heart slows, succumbs to Time's sand;
everything that Is, is Silhouette!" Very nice! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Umbraculture" by Litteratus
