Comments by Rowan
- "This was very interesting. I liked it very much. This work had something that attracted me to every word. "If I had a penny for every liar/I?d buy the world/If I had a spark for every lie/I?d light it all on fire"...I especially admired this stanza. It mirrors my own thoughts. Great write; it was fascinating.
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Posted by Rowan on "if i had" by DarkestOnyx
- "After a death we believe it is the end. We look back on their marks the people have left on us and remember them. Sometimes the pain is too hard to bare. This was a nice write. I loved the imagery."
Posted by Rowan on "remember" by DarkestOnyx
- "Heartbreak is a feeling everyone must endure in their lifetime. It's hard to shield a heart from the joy and pain of love. It finds us in the darkest of places and lifts us up to crush us down. But we crave that feeling and can not survive without it. Your perception of love can mean this..but it can also mean the greatest moments in life as well. Nice write and welcome to DP."
Posted by Rowan on "One More" by DarkestOnyx
