Comments by Dilated View
- "Man this just dripped with bitterness. The words you used to describe these emotions flowed together really well to pain this picture and I really enjoyed the concept flow from stanza/line to stanza/line. That last stanza just a knife in the front. No one wants to feel like an afterthought, but feeling like an afterthought as a result your elegy not arriving yet? That is heartbreaking but..., been there did that, am sure I am not the only one and somehow life went on. Take a couple sips of encouragement but in the meanwhile thank you much for sharing, this was a really interesting read."
Posted by Dilated View on "Funeral Dirge" by DescendingDown
