Comments by Dilated View

  • ""I need to get out of this hole instead of dwelling further. I need to find the light inside to save me from myself." This stanza really hit a nerve for me. Have felt this way so many times, and sometimes it feels like even the act of attempting to claw out of that hole just ends up making the hole deeper. I liked that you did two completely separate poems here but that they meshed together well. Thank you for sharing your pain."
    Posted by Dilated View on "Trapped in Depression" by Dark Nymph
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