Comments by Phalanx
- "Now this is definately more what I stear towards. The placement of words to pose your suggestions and undoctored subject matter put it togther well. "
Posted by Phalanx on "ADDICTED" by poe_lover28
- "The first half came on very strong, I appreciated your simple choice in words. Not overly verbose. I don't like it when poeple try to overcompensate with big words. You kept it dense and didn't allow it to lose meaning but the second half all except for the last line didn't have the same flare. But overall a mustlike. Nice."
Posted by Phalanx on "Their hate" by poe_lover28
