Comments by ubiquitoussoul

  • "suddenly you've extracted from me such heavy emotion I'm not to familiar with... saying that this piece transfixed me into your method of coping.. this was composed very well..you are the artist painting the sun where everyone was clouded..crowded..I could never devise the effect of a lost one..tried playing it in my mind in a troubling time.. I see you are a good hearted person ..I imagine this task with difficulty but Im unsure.. it hit a dark place within and I only hope we continue to accept were not perfect.. I say great punctuation made it enjoyably smooth reading...each line is worth its capturing utterance... thanks for the braveness,i hope for the best"
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "If I Say It, That Makes It Real" by RoseTheBrokenHearted
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