Comments by ubiquitoussoul

  • "And that street part..just inspiring..powerful..you have all a voice of your own.. And it weaves art..the kind you want to hang on your wall and enjoy everyday..don't let nothing take you down.. Intelligent wording too btw.. "
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "to exist " by Beautiful Incidental
  • "Wow.. The imagery seeping from this is beautiful..good lines throughout,, you really describe your feeling with this.. You tapped me in..In one part I imagined a thin but heavy gossamer of a dress outfitting you..with the weight of the world..like your trapped..and the seeds part was just head on.. Nice"
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "to exist " by Beautiful Incidental
  • "This..was mind blowing greatness..all of it..all the lines.."the mind's interrogation" you say..your heart to bleed..all a game ..where your getting hurt..but all a fascination...a painful choice..but when aware of the motives I imagine you're on for the ride..How far can one go? implodes?..would it be the knowledge of that around you that gets you off further.to explore..beyond the boundaries that are broken."shockwaves of indecision "..when I read the..it did just that for me..it sent a wave down my spine..it's routine..moving..chillingly revealing..great write..hope that's the real routine "
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "prick me" by Beautiful Incidental
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