Comments by ubiquitoussoul
- "Oooh..this took me from one scene..pulsing and energetic..hot and enticing..to another scene..were its over..the sun is rising and you're saying your goodbyes..I like that sudden twisting of time in the same frame..meaning that it flowed smoothly and connected..the words..said right can move.."burning my shoulder,leaving it cool and moist,"so in burning your shoulder..it is cold and moist?..interesting way of envisioning..ponders that for a second...well thanks for the nice read.."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Some Night in December" by Moonflower
