Comments by Blood Saga
- "A very funny piece overall. When I first read the beginning I thought it would be like that all the way through. But than it became very honest and I felt like it had more of a point to it.
Don't feel so bad, you will get better at writing with a little practice.
Very good personification :D"
Posted by Blood Saga on "I Raped My Notebook" by technicolour-girl