Comments by ALBATROSS
- "This flows so elegantly. This is such a nice little snapshot of time where through relaxation and bliss one comes across epiphanies whether truly realizing what is or just realizing what is not - Sometimes the epiphany lies within the apathy of the escape. But in all cases, I think that it makes you come to terms with yourself and existence in a peaceful way. And I think that you captured a piece of this in your writing. (For me at least, It served as a reminder of this feeling)
Thank you for gracing me with this poem, It's always a treat to run across these types of poems that warm my heart like wine and smoke. Beautiful."
Posted by ALBATROSS on "there are worse things than being alone." by Six-Out
- "That first stanza really made me think about how a child sees, and I think you beautifully captured that which we lost as we age. It kind of serves as the benchmark of our sentiments in which we miserably fall short. When the reader then stops to imagine the brokenheart sleepers, you create another image entirely. There's beauty in the polarity you presented and I quite enjoyed this poem. Thanks."
Posted by ALBATROSS on "when ten is twelve." by Six-Out
