Comments by ALBATROSS
- "I felt this poem cling to my lungs and stay with me the whole night. To read what you write of insecurity involved with embracing love is so ironic; The limn of your mind articulated transforms these catalyst characteristics into something that deserve anyone's love and assimilation.
I stand humbled in your presence of mind and body and will cling to my desire for your hand as your words clung to the deepest depths of myself. Yet you make me breathe easier. What a magnificent soul you wield."
Posted by ALBATROSS on "Un furnished Please" by surething
- "This has a tone of witchy and eerie invitation but also seems like you don't have a choice in the matter which is exactly the kind of entrapped feeling you get when you are stuck with poetic ideas you feel are mediocre. The irony is that this is no where near mediocre. I'm in love with your writing style, it inspires me more than you probably even realize. I can't wait for you to write more. You have so much talent that we are only seeing the tip of. Beautiful poem."
Posted by ALBATROSS on "Completely Within My Reach" by surething
- "I don't even know where to start. I can pick a poem from you out of a million because of the distinct way you convey things. The narrative tone that you use to convey such feelings is a smart one. Furthermore, you find an interesting angle. Your voice in this conveys you as your own worst enemy - almost like this is one of your inner demons speaking to you and convincing you to drink its degenerate liquids."
Posted by ALBATROSS on "Completely Within My Reach" by surething
